Free Hollywood Adult Film. Hi, I'm From Spain. Can You Help Me, Please? Can You Correct The Grammar Of These Two Writings, Please?

Hi, I'm from Spain. Can you help me, please? Can you correct the grammar of these two writings, please? - free hollywood adult film.

I would say that the network of Hollywood, the problems of loss of the market and the pirates.
On the one hand, Hollywood has suffered the loss of their developing film industry. They spent a lot of these companies.
On the other hand, piracy is not an easy start in Hollywood. The piracy has reduced sales in the market for the major Hollywood. Now it is mainly on DVD and ticket sales.

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I think the main reason for the copying of movies is the high cost illeally cinemas. However, it is the only reason there are more of a truck. We need to think about several points.

First, as I said before, the high cost of cinema. Many families are starter to tire of these costs. Tickets for all children and to € 5.00 for adults, about € 8.00. For a family to fill their mouths, to offer as free films for download, more profitable than their pockets empty.

Secondly, the uncertainty about whether it is a good film. In recent years, Hollywood has begun the new film of the trilogy for profit and success as it is release for "The Lord of the Rings."

Unfortunately, none of the released films was successful. People are starting to complain about these charges, and we decided to download movies were better than buying a ticket and be disappointed by the film.

All in all, I think the reasons for the network of piracy are the high cost of film and quality, the scriptnew films. Much better to stay home and not have to pay for a movie.

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If you think something is wrong or if you have other ideas, please tell me.

Thank you for everything.